I will be evaluating Group 13's Preliminary Movie.
What I think went really well with our Preliminary Movie is that it has really great match cuts that flows smoothly in order. It makes it look professional and not amateurish. The part when Ayub is holding the handle of the door, then we get the camera inside the room where the match cut of him entering the room looks flawless like a real professional movie scene.
I also liked the extreme close up of Julien’s eyes because it feels up the whole screen and also he is feeling uncomfortable of the situation and having this being sown as an extreme close up will make the audience feel the same way of uncomfortableness.
What I think we can improve on is the fact that when Ahmed finishes drying his hands off on the towel, we immediately get a really bad jump cut after. It looks really awkward because it doesn’t seem to fit in professionally and it looks out of place.